The Importance of Proofreading

September 2nd, 2011

Most of the time the worst thing that happens when you make a typo is you look a little foolish. However, sometimes the consequences of proofreading errors can be much more serious. Take a look at this article from the US edition of Wired magazine for a real cautionary tale.

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Books for Editors: The Elements of Style

July 19th, 2011

So far, all five of the works in our Books for Editors series have been British. This time, we take a look at one of the most influential books on English writing to come out of the US: Strunk and White’s The Elements of Style.

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The original 1918 edition of the book, which is often simply called Strunk and White, outlined a series of elementary rules of usage, elementary principles of composition, some “matters of form”, and a list of commonly misused words and expressions. A very prescriptive little book (the authors are not afraid to set down absolute rules, such as outlawing the passive voice), it has a lot in common with Fowler’s in terms of its pervasive attitude. Prioritising a direct and straightforward form of English, it has had a far-reaching influence on American English, so much so that it is widely held as being chiefly responsible for the way in which students in the US were taught composition in the latter half of the twentieth century.

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Written by a Professor of English at Cornell and a long-time writer for the New Yorker (White also wrote the popular children’s books Charlotte’s Web and Stuart Little), the book’s mantra is “make every word tell.” It has always been a controversial book and the revisions it has undergone (the latest in 1999) have  contributed to its reputation as a book that fiercy divides its readers. A Boston Globe review describes how it is “a hodgepodge, its now-antiquated pet peeves jostling for space with 1970s taboos and 1990s computer advice”. We are inclined to agree with this assessment although, of course, such accusations could be made against most style guides, and all such works are all products of a particular time and environment. What is certainly true is that The Elements of Style remains a very important book, a must for all writers and an engaging and enjoyable read.

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Books for Editors: Butcher’s Copy-editing

June 22nd, 2011

The latest in our series on Books for Editors is a hefty tome with a hefty title: Butcher’s Copy-editing: The Cambridge Handbook for Editors, Copy-editors and Proofreaders

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Being generous types here at My Blue Pencil, despite our Oxford base we are perfectly happy to include a book with its roots firmly in the ‘other place’ (i.e. Cambridge). This book started life as a set of rules and regulations for the editorial team at Cambridge University Press, but has since grown to become an essential on any serious editor’s shelf.  Since its first publication in 1975 (the current edition is the fourth), it has set the standard for anyone preparing text for publication in whatever medium. Described by our professional body, the Society for Editors and Proofreaders, as “the copy-editor’s bible”, it covers all aspects of the editorial process and runs to over 500 pages of detailed guidelines and invaluable references. Indeed, its comprehensive glossaries and checklists are one of its real strengths and it is the sort of book that, even after many years of professional editing and proofreading, most editors still find themselves consulting on a regular basis.

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Unlike some of the other books that we at My Blue Pencil have written about in this series, this is a serious reference book probably of interest only to professional editors, with none of the humorous touches that make Guardian Style and The Economist Style Guide such easy reads. Nonetheless, it is clearly and intelligently constructed and has an answer for everything.

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Books for Editors: A Dictionary of Modern English Usage

June 2nd, 2011

Welcome to the latest in our series on Books for Editors (following earlier pieces on The Economist Style Guide, Guardian Style and the Oxford Style Manual). This time it is the turn of a genuine classic, A Dictionary of Modern English Usage by Henry W. Fowler, informally known as Fowler’s Modern English Usage and just simply Fowler’s.

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First published in 1926, the book is conceived less as a dictionary and more as a style guide for writing clearly and expressively. David Crystal – in his introduction to the 2009 reprint – says that, “No book had more influence on twentieth-century attitudes to the English language in Britain”. This is unarguable. Fowler’s approach eulogised a simple and direct writing style, free of unnecessary verbiage and cliché. He pointed out the artificiality of grammatical rules such as bans on split infinitives and dangling prepositions and his attitude to writing, whilst perhaps not as uniform and scientific as one might wish, nonetheless remains hugely influential today, a set of guiding principals for anyone aiming to write good, plain English that can be easily understood.

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For more insights into Fowler from David Crystal himself, see this video.

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Twitter for Editors

May 6th, 2011

We have just discovered this piece by ex-Washington Post editor Craig Stoltz in praise of Twitter.  It is from 2008 so it’s not new, but it is a good read and offers great advice to all the people out there struggling to stay under 140 characters in their tweets.  We were particularly struck by the last paragraph – which sent us right back to the beginning to check the author was telling the truth.

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As we have said before in this blog post, we do really like Twitter and find it a great exercise trying to write coherent, entertaining tweets, trimming and condensing whilst all the time allowing a message to be got across clearly – and with room for a (shortened) url when necessary!  If you haven’t discovered our feed on Twitter yet, please check us out and give us a shout.  Also, if you need help getting your tweets down to size, you know where to turn!

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Books for Editors: The Oxford Style Manual

April 2nd, 2011

After introducing The Economist Style Guide and Guardian Style in the first two of our Books for Editors series, now it is the turn of our local favourite and a book with a long heritage, the Oxford Style Manual.

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Oxford Style Manual

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This is really two books in one, uniting the Oxford Dictionary for Writers and Editors (dating from 1981) and the Oxford Guide to Style (which has for most of its life been known as Hart’s Rules).  Hart’s Rules for Compositors and Editors at the University Press, Oxford was a slim guide, first printed in 1893, which went through thirty-nine editions before finally becoming a crucial part of the Oxford Style Guide.  The book now sitting on the My Blue Pencil desk is a huge tome, as big as most dictionaries and a definitive and essential work.  As well as explaining in detail all aspects of editing and proofreading and providing contemporary and authoritative guidance on such things as spelling, punctuation and capitalisation, the Oxford Style Guide offers those who produce much more complicated texts an invaluable guide to how to present references, quotations, illustrations, indexes and notes in a consistent and clear manner.

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Although here at My Blue Pencil we cultivate a flexible attitude to the craft of editing and proofreading, preferring to ensure internal consistency and fluency as opposed to imposing a set of overarching external principles, if we had to have just one style guide on our bookshelf, this would be it.

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Books for Editors: The Guardian Style Guide

March 12th, 2011

Welcome to the second part of our guide to the books that editors use.  Following on from our piece on The Economist Style Guide, we again focus on a guide published by a British periodical, this time Guardian Style by David Marsh.

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Guardian Style

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John Humphries appears on the book jacket, quoted to the effect that, “This stuff matters. Rules do not limit; they liberate.”  The team behind mybluepencil.net agree with this and this principle certainly seems to help the Guardian newspaper get its points across as it has won the Plain English Campaign award for best newspaper twice in the last four years and this book is one of the reasons why.  A very well-thought out and accessible directory of clear English, as well as setting out the Guardian’s linguistic approach to race, disability, terrorism and other political hot potatoes, it also contains funny and illuminating mini-essays on such things as the apostrophe and its mis-use and words that are easily confused (try this one for size: hyperthermia, hot; hypothermia, cold).

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There will be a brand new edition out soon, but if you can’t wait to check it out, it is available online here.

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Books for Editors: The Economist Style Guide

February 13th, 2011

Editors and proofreaders should be familiar with plenty of Style Guides and we thought that it would be a good idea to introduce some of the books we use here at My Blue Pencil.  So, in the first of this series, here is our introduction to The Economist Style Guide.

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The Economist Style Guide

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It is a concise and witty guide to good writing style, full of pithy and persuasive advice.  Although it was originally created for the writers and editors of The Economist magazine, anyone writing business and financial documents and conforming to its rules will not go far wrong.  It is now on its ninth edition and has been published since 1986.  One of its strengths is its comprehensive list of the differences between British and American English.

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It is full of great tips and has a global reach that some of the other guides don’t have.  For example, did you know this:

Black: in the black means in profit in Britain, but making losses in some places. Use in profit.

or this:

Run. In countries with a presidential system you may run for office. In those with a parliamentary one, stand.

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It really is a very useful book to have around but if you want to check it out now, a large section of it is available online here.  Enjoy.

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The Evolution of Language

December 4th, 2010

Hello to all our blog readers – sorry we’ve been so quiet over the last month or so. Too much editing and not enough blog writing at My Blue Pencil HQ recently! We’ll try and redress the balance somewhat from now on.

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Still, we have to confess that this is just a quick recommendation post, letting everyone know that there is a fascinating pull-out section in this week’s New Scientist. The theme is ‘The Evolution of Language’ and it is largely based on the book of the same name by W. Tecumseh Fitch, professor of cognitive biology at the University of Vienna. Being one of New Scientist’s Instant Expert series, it takes the form of a briefing and is full of really fascinating insights, taking the reader from  Homo erectus to Darwin to contemporary genetics.

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There are some extracts here but it is, as the saying goes, available in all good newsagents now!

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William Safire’s Rules for Writers

September 17th, 2010

William Safire, who died last year, was a prominent American thinker with a regular column in the New York Times called ‘On Language’ that he used to air his thoughts on the use and misuse of English. He analysed the origins and absurdities of countless phrases in a witty and self-mocking style. While professional grammarians were not always impressed with his pronouncements or with his erudition, he attracted an immense following and wrote several books on the subject, as well as setting in stone the set of rules below.  Each is an example of what it purports to ban and as such is a list that editors and proofreaders love for its wit and irreverence, a great reference to pull out when faced with someone just that bit too prescriptive.  We hope you enjoy it too.

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William Safire’s Rules for Writers

  • Remember to never split an infinitive.
  • The passive voice should never be used.
  • Do not put statements in the negative form.
  • Verbs has to agree with their subjects.
  • Proofread carefully to see if you words out.
  • If you reread your work, you can find on rereading a great deal of repetition can be avoided by rereading and editing.
  • A writer must not shift your point of view.
  • And don’t start a sentence with a conjunction.
  • (Remember, too, a preposition is a terrible word to end a sentence with.)
  • Don’t overuse exclamation marks!!
  • Place pronouns as close as possible, especially in long sentences, as of 10 or more words, to their antecedents.
  • Writing carefully, dangling participles must be avoided.
  • If any word is improper at the end of a sentence, a linking verb is.
  • Take the bull by the hand and avoid mixing metaphors.
  • Avoid trendy locutions that sound flaky.
  • Everyone should be careful to use a singular pronoun with singular nouns in their writing.
  • Always pick on the correct idiom.
  • The adverb always follows the verb.
  • Last but not least, avoid clichés like the plague; seek viable alternatives.